Wednesday, October 28, 2009

I do.





I can still achingly remember that night -- when Luna closed her deep set eyes and wandered through a cluster of stars, basking over that inexplicable mirth of satisfaction while parading her effect of glistening splendor. 



That effortless moment of incomparable beauty of love and would result to certain products of fate that would leave you overwhelmingly empty as a result from an ocean of passions.



his eyes were coextensive with that forceful heat from the sun -- sending an array of light and would seemingly result to a golden tint, his face was perfectly relative, proportional to say the least.


what could I ever offer Time to relive such a memory?

that scent; the discovery of recognition from your other half -- trailing through an unexpected mist of attachment. those moments wherein he would caressed your skin on those miserable days, only hoping for a sense of comfort that he would unknowingly fill, never leaving an after taste of bitterness but rather, a sensational eerie tingling of yearning.







13 comments:

  1. wow ! you really put meaning to it . great writer ! >:D<

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  2. BRAVO!
    very nice.
    I love it so much♥
    keep it up master. :)

    ♥ your sheep Ü

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  3. well, someone is yearning. ohoho! oh chill, i'm just teasing. this writing makes me wish i had memories of this sort. whoops! have i said too much? :))

    you know who i am. i'm you're secretly and imaginably engaged friend. haha. matt. x3

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  4. bravo chum... write more. :)))))) -andy

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  5. goood job seatmate :D i think one is not enough ryt ? so like andy said .. write more :D - ate ken

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  6. you miss someone chuuuum? ;)
    haha, just kidding. :]

    epic. keep writing, i'll be following :D

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  7. bro! hehe...
    very nice.
    write more! :D

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  8. D'awh, I love it :D

    MAKE ANOTHER ONE.

    Yus.

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  9. chum ! i so love what you wrote ! :)
    just like what other people said above, keep on writing ang we will support you ! you're really good so continue :) muah !

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  10. things i would like to say for this:

    - i was right, you are a verbose MF and i AM thoroughly insecure about it D:
    - the sentence 'what could i ever offer Time to relive such a memory?' (which i love btw 8D) is killer. so much impression on me.
    - but the ending is hanging, i think. D: bare? but who am i to say? i do not know this stuff. o.O
    - but still, it's so pretty 8) and intricate, and all that :D i'm intrigued ~ i know the line's been used so many times but keep writing and i'll be posted! :D
    - aaaaand of course, COOL STORY BRO!

    - you know who i am :D

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  11. I love how it is intricate . and the way you chose your words, amazing.

    - Hannah .

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  12. "what could i ever offer time to relive such memory?"

    --- i'd offer anything. great one chum! :D

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